Please accept this revision:

  I got my first real Pentium
  Bought it at the local shop
  Played Quake till my fingers ached
  Was the summer of '99

  Me and some guys from school
  Had a LAN and we played real hard
  Jonny lost, the network failed
  Should've upgraded our thinnet

  Oh, when I look back now
  Ninety-eight was more fun than XP
  And if I had the choice
  My kids wouldn't be stuck with chromebooks
  I really miss my old PC

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This is why I come here every day. Bravo.

OMG... So good...

Here's me, puzzling to which part of "Summer of 69" I should hum this to work best...

As you probably guessed, I'm in IT and not in the fine arts ;-)

Not a critique on your "fine arts", I attributed the struggle more to myself ;-)